{"id":88,"date":"2008-03-12T22:20:09","date_gmt":"2008-03-12T22:20:09","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/occamstypewriter.org\/rpg\/2008\/03\/12\/on_the_care_and_training_of_students_especially_the_training\/"},"modified":"2008-03-12T22:20:09","modified_gmt":"2008-03-12T22:20:09","slug":"on_the_care_and_training_of_students_especially_the_training","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/occamstypewriter.org\/rpg\/2008\/03\/12\/on_the_care_and_training_of_students_especially_the_training\/","title":{"rendered":"On the care and training of students, especially the training"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>bq. A small group of thoughtful people could change the world. Indeed, it&#8217;s the only thing that ever has. &#8212; Margaret Mead<\/p>\n<p>\nHaving, in the last three days, <em>edited<\/em> a manuscript when I should have only been checking for tyops <em>sic, Henry, sic<\/em>, and similarly for an interminable chapter 4 of a PhD thesis, I have come to the following conclusion:<\/p>\n<p>\nThere is something rotten in the state of Denmark.<\/p>\n<p>\nWhat?  <\/p>\n<p>\nSorry, wrong parallel universe.  Let&#8217;s try that one again:<\/p>\n<p>\n&#8216;Scientific&#8217; writing is doomed unless we start with the students.<\/p>\n<p>\nMaxine Clarke recently <a href=\"http:\/\/blogs.nature.com\/nautilus\/2008\/03\/language_of_scientific_publish_1.html\">pointed out<\/a> that <em>Nature<\/em> journal editors encourage authors to use &#8216;direct, plain prose&#8217;.  Linda Cooper has <a href=\"http:\/\/network.nature.com\/blogs\/user\/UA8E0D68F\">written<\/a> some very good articles, sadly not updated since the middle of last year. There are <a href=\"http:\/\/www.nature.com\/authors\/author_services\/how_write.html\">guidelines<\/a> in the Author Services section of <em>NPG<\/em> and an excellent <a href=\"http:\/\/www.nature.com\/nphys\/journal\/v3\/n9\/full\/nphys724.html\">editorial<\/a> in <em>Nature Physics<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p>\nBut still, on Monday, I banged my head against the desk in an exquisite m\u00e9lange of grief and hilarity, at the following:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>\nTriple resonance experiments give rise to three-dimensional datasets that contain three frequency dimensions;\n<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>\nThe problem is not with teaching post-docs and PIs how to write.  The problem is that students are never taught how to write directly and clearly.  Indeed, we <em>encourage<\/em> them to write stilted, impenetrable prose in the third person and passive voice, because that is considered <em>scientific<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p>\nAnd it&#8217;s pants.<\/p>\n<p>\nA friend pointed out to me yesterday, after I had raved somewhat immoderately about this, that I was in a privileged position.  As (through hard graft and a little bit of natural talent) I am able to write, it is my duty and responsibility to assist those who have difficulty.  She&#8217;s right, of course; but it is a huge task.  <\/p>\n<p>\nBy the time you get to reading editorials in learned journals, it&#8217;s far too late.  One post-doc can do a little bit in his own lab, under the authority of a sympathetic PI of course, but really, this needs to start at undergraduate level, and continue throughout a scientist&#8217;s training.  Ultimately, we are in the business of <em>communication<\/em>.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>bq. 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